10-30 Page Script Feedback

I have a 10–30-page screenplay draft that I’d like a seasoned reader to review before I submit it to Script Pipeline or The Black List. What I need is honest, actionable feedback that will elevate the script’s structure, pacing, character depth, dialogue, and overall marketability.

A good eye for screenplay formatting (Final Draft, Celtx, or PDF), a solid grasp of industry expectations, and the ability to translate notes into clear, constructive suggestions are essential. I’m not looking for a line-by-line proofread so much as big-picture coverage with specific examples that show me where the story sings and where it stalls.

Deliverables:
• A concise coverage report (logline, summary, strengths, weaknesses, and recommendation)
• My script returned with inline comments or margin notes highlighting key issues and quick wins
• A one-page action plan outlining the next revision steps

If you’ve provided coverage for contests, agencies, or production companies—and you enjoy helping writers polish a script until it’s submission-ready—I’d love to work with you on this.