English Proofreading for Natural Conversation Text

Please proofread simple English.
This is an English text that has been translated by DeepL.
The volume is about 1300 words and the content is an explanation about Japanese culture.
Phrases are easy.
The conversation is between two anime or manga-like characters, and it will be used for Youtube Video, so please keep them in mind.

Person1
Female genius in 10s, smart. Plays the role of a teacher.
Person2
A sociable woman with a good sense of humor. She is not very smart. Plays the role of a student.

I will continue to make contents.
So I wish I find continurable partner.