Copy edit a 100 words statement

It is a one-time job. Proofread a 100-word personal/career statement.

Please fix the typo, grammar errors, and other English as second language problems. Please highlight/leave comments on places where you don't understand or do not know how to fix them.

The timeline is a bit tight. I will send the document to you immediately noon Eastern Time. The work needs to be done by Thursday (2days interval) . Tha