Need to Proofreading & Edit my Novel in 1 hour

I need the editing of a memoir. The text is 42k words.
The memoir is about the difficult journey that two Ukrainian women made to escape Kyiv after the recent Russian invasion. It needs line editing where necessary, copy editing, and proofreading.
The editor has to improve the narration style, flow, sentence structure, grammar, and use of the right words and adverbs.
The readers will be the general public.
Previous experience with the editing of memoirs or novels is necessary.
This is a job for English native speakers only.
I have attached a few pages as a sample for your evaluation.