Editing a book of short stories

I have an English book, containing a few short stories. (80 pages, size: A6) I need a native English speaker (American or British) familiar with fictional literature , to take a final look at the translation of my short stories and cast any needed editions on the dialogues (to become closer to the daily speaking language) and checking for any grammatical mistakes and edits them. At the end, I want a separate document file (word or PDF) mentioning my mistakes including the page and the correct form of it in red color, and if it's not wrong but something else is preferred, mention it in blue color.