Comprehensive College Essay Review
Budget: $30 – $250 USD
I have a draft of my daughter’s college admissions essay and would like a fresh set of expert eyes on it. Your task is to provide overall feedback—more than just a grammar sweep. I’m interested in insight on:
• Strength and authenticity of her voice
• Clarity and flow of the narrative
• Impact of the opening and closing paragraphs
• Suggestions to tighten wording or reorganize ideas where needed
There is no required format such as APA or MLA; the focus is on the story and how effectively it showcases who she is.
Deliverables I expect:
1. An annotated version of the essay (comments or tracked changes) highlighting specific improvements.
2. A brief summary (one page or less) outlining key strengths, areas to refine, and next-step recommendations.
When you respond, please highlight your relevant experience—whether that’s college admissions counseling, professional editing, or successful essay coaching. A concise sample of prior review work or a link to testimonials will help me select the best fit.
• Strength and authenticity of her voice
• Clarity and flow of the narrative
• Impact of the opening and closing paragraphs
• Suggestions to tighten wording or reorganize ideas where needed
There is no required format such as APA or MLA; the focus is on the story and how effectively it showcases who she is.
Deliverables I expect:
1. An annotated version of the essay (comments or tracked changes) highlighting specific improvements.
2. A brief summary (one page or less) outlining key strengths, areas to refine, and next-step recommendations.
When you respond, please highlight your relevant experience—whether that’s college admissions counseling, professional editing, or successful essay coaching. A concise sample of prior review work or a link to testimonials will help me select the best fit.