College Application Essay Proofreading

I've drafted my college application statement and now need a sharp editorial eye to refine it before submission. The piece is complete in content, but I want every sentence to read smoothly, comply with the prompt, and be completely free of grammatical or punctuation errors. Your task is two-fold: 1) proofread for correctness—grammar, spelling, punctuation, usage; 2) edit for clarity, coherence, and adherence to the prompt, while preserving my voice. Please also evaluate the overall structure and flow, suggesting rearrangements or cuts where they will strengthen the narrative. I prefer to receive the document back in Word with Track Changes enabled plus a clean final copy, so I can see exactly what you adjusted. If you've previously polished successful college essays and are comfortable providing concise margin notes that justify major edits, you're the collaborator I'm looking for.

Writing sample: 9 pages
Applicant statement: 4 pages