Fiction Book Character Development Edit

I have a completed fiction manuscript that now needs a fresh, professional edit focused on sharpening its character development while also tightening grammar, clarity, and overall flow. The story and basic structure are already in place; what I’m looking for is an editor who can dig into my protagonists’ motivations, relationships, and arcs, making sure each one is consistent, believable, and engaging from first page to last.

The job will involve:
• A thorough line-by-line review to catch any grammatical or punctuation slips.
• Focused feedback on character depth, dialogue authenticity, and emotional pacing.
• Clear, in-document comments and tracked changes so I can understand every adjustment you recommend.

Please include samples of past work—preferably fiction projects where you improved character development—as this will help me gauge fit quickly. A concise note about your editing approach and typical turnaround time is welcome too. The manuscript is ready to send as soon as we agree on terms, and I’m eager to begin right away.