Looking for reviews of my type of narration style
Budget: $10 – $30 USD
Hi there!
So I am thinking I'd like to narrate some stories I am writing but was wondering how my particular style sounds to most audiences. Any quick reviews or tips would be appreciated, which could be done through messages, or would be happy to recieve more detailed feedback. I have attached a short sample with this post.
Would be looking for feedback on things like intonation, style, any lisps or any other comments you may have. Ideally it would keep people interested thoughout the story. Thanks for any feedback in advance!
So I am thinking I'd like to narrate some stories I am writing but was wondering how my particular style sounds to most audiences. Any quick reviews or tips would be appreciated, which could be done through messages, or would be happy to recieve more detailed feedback. I have attached a short sample with this post.
Would be looking for feedback on things like intonation, style, any lisps or any other comments you may have. Ideally it would keep people interested thoughout the story. Thanks for any feedback in advance!