video editor to make content more engaging

I am seeking a video editor who can make my social media videos more engaging. The ideal candidate should have experience in editing social media videos and be able to create fast-paced and dynamic content. The final cut of the videos should be more than 3 minutes in duration.

I have done basic editing already, so suggest how you will make the video better, also what subtitle style can you offer?

I am attaching a link of my video :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PArkJG4ER_U&t=4s

begin your proposal by mentioning the names of 2 places I have shown in the video, This is to check that you have understood everything and check the content thoroughly.