Translation critique of comic book text (NATIVE SPANISH preferred)

I recently made three comic book pages. Approximately 270 words in English-to-Spanish translation for text.
I want to hire a freelancer who has fluent / native proficiency in English and Spanish to read the comic with its translated text to give a critical review.

Freelancers who originate in Spanish or English speaking countries will be given first priority.
Attached file is only 1 page of the comic.
Submit price for the entire 3 pages (approx 270 words) and a critical review of the text.
What is good? What is bad? What would be better?
Etc.

PLEASE NOTE
The text was already run through GOOGLE TRANSLATE.