Video Transcription Adjustments / Improvements (DEADLINE: 6 HOURS) -- 2

Hi. Please check this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=laOGG5KdqA8

I have a document with a VIDEO TRANSCRIPTION (attached) but it's not 100% perfect.

And I need your help.

I need you watch this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WR3jTejCDxQ

And make some adjusts and improvements.

I need all phrases EXACTLY as the video.

Please insert all period, comma, exclamation mark, question mark...

Insert new lines...

As I made on the video. Just keep doing my job.

I already did 1/3. You just need to finish it.

Thank you.