SOP writing for MS in data science/Business Analytics for study in USA

I am a Mechanical Engineer from Bangladesh with work experience over 5 years. I have some experience working with data mining in my job. I'm willing to apply for MS in data science/business analytics in USA varsity. I have drafted an SOP for that, but the essay is not well organized and lacks cohesiveness. Basically, I'm looking for someone who has experience in data science/business analytics/ has working knowledge and can link my experience with the course requirements so that I get selected. My target in Ivy league varsities so good quality writing is a must. I will share my draft writing over mail after selecting the candidate