Screenwriting Pitch Prep Partner

I have two completed feature screenplays and two television pilots that are heading to a pitch festival in 30 days. The core drafts are solid, but they need to be shaped into truly market-ready packages.

What I’m bringing to the table
• Full script drafts in Final Draft
• Rough loglines, partial treatments, scattered series-bible notes
• Clear story vision and an open, collaborative mindset

Where I need your expertise
• Tightening dialogue so every line lands with intention
• Stress-testing story structure for pace, stakes and payoff
• Deepening character arcs to make every protagonist and antagonist pop
• Building polished loglines, crisp one-page and full treatments, punchy pitch decks, and complete series bibles that look and read like industry gold

Primary tools
Final Draft (current version), Adobe or Google Slides/Docs for decks, anything else you rely on is welcome as long as we can exchange files smoothly.

Key deliverables (all within 30 days)
1. Revised, proofed Final Draft files for both features and both pilots
2. One-sentence and one-paragraph loglines for each property
3. 1–2 page treatments for the features; pilot overviews for the series
4. Visually clean, PDF-ready pitch decks for all four projects
5. Series bibles (setting, season arcs, character breakdowns, episode guide) for the two shows

Acceptance criteria
• Industry-standard formatting and naming conventions
• No typos or grammatical slips – ready to email as-is
• Cohesive brand voice across all docs so the slate feels unified
• All feedback rounds completed no later than day 25 to leave a buffer before the festival

If you love digging into pages, shaping story, and polishing documents until they gleam, let’s talk and jump in right away.