Screenplay Plot Strengthening Feedback
Budget: $30 – $250 USD
I have a completed feature-length screenplay and I can feel the bones of the story are solid, yet some gaps and wobbly joints remain—especially through the middle stretch. I’m following a classic three-act structure and I’m looking for a fresh, objective eye to:
• Read the script in full.
• Flag any plot holes or logic leaps, large or small.
• Offer concrete suggestions that tighten the Second Act confrontation while keeping Acts I and III consistent.
• Provide practical page-specific notes on pacing, stakes, and scene transitions, plus an overall summary of what’s working and what still needs polish.
Industry-style script coverage, beat-sheet feedback, or annotated PDFs are all welcome formats as long as your comments are clear and actionable. If you have experience guiding rewrites for character-driven dramas and you can speak fluently about structure, turning points, and tension, we’ll be a great fit.
When you deliver your notes, I’ll revise, then circle back for a brief follow-up chat to confirm the fixes land as intended. Looking forward to strengthening this story together.
• Read the script in full.
• Flag any plot holes or logic leaps, large or small.
• Offer concrete suggestions that tighten the Second Act confrontation while keeping Acts I and III consistent.
• Provide practical page-specific notes on pacing, stakes, and scene transitions, plus an overall summary of what’s working and what still needs polish.
Industry-style script coverage, beat-sheet feedback, or annotated PDFs are all welcome formats as long as your comments are clear and actionable. If you have experience guiding rewrites for character-driven dramas and you can speak fluently about structure, turning points, and tension, we’ll be a great fit.
When you deliver your notes, I’ll revise, then circle back for a brief follow-up chat to confirm the fixes land as intended. Looking forward to strengthening this story together.