Mark my creative essay

Job ID: 36272259

Budget: £10 – £20 GBP

Hiya, my deadline is in a few days for the final portfolio for a creative writing class, and my lecturer is off sick, so cant ask for help. Is it possible to read over with fresh eyes and give brutally honest feedback? It's about 1480 words at the moment, but needs to drop about 70 words. I also say "she" too much when opening sentences.
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