Assist me with my marketing project

I'm currently working on a study titled: "A study on the perception of thought leadership as a marketing strategy to build affinity with management-level executives in the UAE’s professional services industry". The title is still a work in progress but essentially I want to study the perception of the effectiveness of thought leadership as a B2B marketing strategy. I've written a literature review and I'm now at the secondary research stage but I need some assistance with making sure I have a logical flow and argument and I'm on the right track. I'm looking for someone well versed in B2B marketing (thought leadership awareness is obviously a bonus). I've attached the literature review WIP and my research questions along with some feedback in the comments section. Thanks