white paper review

Job ID: 35339364

Budget: $10 – $30 USD

Hi, I have this white paper/essay I want you to review and advise if it is good or needs modification. This is for my job interview so I need it ASAP.
this is the guideline and attached my paper that needs the review
1. Write in the style you would use to write a business whitepaper or essay and do not use bullet points, graphics, tables, charts or flow charts.
2. Remember as you write that the reader may not be familiar with specific technical terminology, corporate cultures, and scenarios. Use language and descriptions in your response that enable readers to fully understand the situation.
3. Please limit your response to 1-2 pages (no more than 8000 characters).

We will evaluate your writing on two primary criteria:
- Clarity of thought and expression (i.e. did you explain your point well?)
- Organization and structure (i.e. does it flow? does it make sense?)


My budget is $10 to $15
Thank you