develop phd thesis through examiners commnets

Job ID: 33192741

Budget: $250 – $750 USD

i have commnets from suprvisors and 3 examiners in my thesis in title auditing competences in public accountants
have some serious comments and have parts need to re write and improve like problem statment and significance of study etc
so need that work to be done soon in short time
attached is examiners commnets