application form to ministry of education (primary education)

I am writing an application (New Zealand) for one of my kids to be home schooled. I have already written a first draft and I have an example of an approved application which I'm using to base it off, I also have the criteria. It includes details of what I will teach my child and how it will be done and what teaching philosophy I will use. I need someone to look over it and make it sound professional and clear to read also meeting the clearly stated criteria so that the application is processed quickly.
Someone with knowledge of teaching (primary or early childhood) would be best but each section is easy to research there are examples online as well as the copy I can provide and the list of criteria.

Thankyou
Christina