Thesis Completion topic Institutions quality and the FDI flows to African countries

Hi guys so I am looking for someone who has reasonable and understandable knowledge on empirical analysis and the gravity model as this is crucial part in my thesis. I have written everything else correctly from introduction up until the methodology part. I will share my latest comments from my supervisor and also papers he attached so I read and get an idea of what exactly is wrong with my thesis and how I can improve it. Please have a look and let me know what you think. I also attached my work which was what he commented on. My work is named FDI AND LITERATURE .DOC