Research Paper On "the alchemist" and "the yellow wallpaper"

writing a 5–7-page comparison/contrast essay using TWO primary sources "the alchemist" and "the yellow wallpaper" and at least four secondary sources (primarily literary criticism). At least two of your secondary sources should come from the library databases, such as Literature Resource Center, Literary Reference Center, Academic Search Premier, JSTOR, etc. Be sure that any web source is suitable (e.g., from an .edu or .org site and not a wiki or a homework help site) and that all secondaries, including books, are used to help you to discuss your primary sources. (They should not be novels or other additional works of literature, because these are primary sources.)
Make sure that your paper is in proper MLA form, including the parenthetical citations for quotes AND paraphrases, and the list of works cited. Don’t forget to use Purdue Owl, and the other research/handbook materials we have seen. These cover most, if not all of the questions you have about how to write this paper. Write an essay in which you compare and/or contrast the impact of discrimination in TWO of the works. Must be in MLA format. MUST USE CITE SUPPORT THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE ESSAY. MUST use quotation marks for any words or phrases that come from secondary sources. Intergrade and cite your source and use quotation marks.

Below, I attached my first draft for reference (it got a 64%)
I also attached the rubric required for the essay.
Please please please help me pass this with a good grade!