Editorial Assessment

My book is a science fiction novel. I feel my book is missing something and it is not finish. I would love your feedback on my book. Please tell me where it needs improvements? If the storyline is too weak? Does it pull the reader in and make them want to know more about the character?

It tells a story about a female who was born within a loving family and had everything others around her did not until, she was given a gift. It feels like a curse to her because as soon as she got the gift, her whole life changes. Its 74899 words, 278 pgs