Dissertation Chapter Enhancement & Supervisor Feedback Response

I need to improve a chapter of my dissertation based on feedback from my supervisor. The areas of concern include the Research Background, Problem Statement, and Research Objectives.

Ideal skills and experience for the job include:
- Proficiency in academic writing and editing
- Familiarity with dissertation structure and requirements
- Ability to incorporate feedback effectively

Please note that the tone of the enhanced chapter should be formal and academic.