Computer Science Essay -- 2

So I have an essay which had some issues which I would like to discuss privately in messages. I would need someone with a lot and I repeat a lot of experince in the computer science world, not just a great essay writer.

I already have the essay so I would only need someone to fix / rewrite my essay based on what I currently have, I would need some more sources / better data, some new graphs, and tweak slightly the research question of the essay to make it better.