Academic Journal Article Review Assistance

I need help with my academic journal article. I am seeking a professional with experience in reviewing academic publications to provide a section-by-section analysis of the content and structure of my article. The ideal freelancer for this project should have a strong background in academic writing and publishing, and be able to provide constructive feedback to help improve the quality of my article. I had a small feedback form a journal but I am not quite sure what edits are required form me.

The article is focused on the field of health.