Statement of propose's proofreading

Hi, I would like you to proofread my statement of purpose. It shouldn't take much time as it is ONE page only. You should check the following:

- Typos, spelling or grammatical errors
- Make sure that it has strong, clear, and concise writing
- Cliches and repetitive language
- Formal language (i.e., academic writing)
- Positive and confident tone

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Thank you