Review of Multiple Short Screenplays -- Please No Unsolicited Bids -- 3
Budget: $30 – $250 USD
I'm not able to read and respond to unsolicited bids.
I'm looking for screenplay feedback. There are 8 short scripts totaling around 35 pages (some are micro scripts that are just a page or two).
I'll mention right off the bat that most of the scripts involve gay characters and a few might be considered extremely irreverent towards religion/god so may not be for everyone. (And several are also quite surreal/absurdist.)
I want to cut anything that's not great so I need someone primarily to (1) highlight in one color all scenes/moments that most resonate with them (2) cross out/highlight in another color all those they dislike; and (3) make suggestions for improving specific scenes/moments and the overall scripts. I ask that the highlights be on the screenplay itself though you are welcome to make your comments on a separate document if that's easier for you.
I need to emphasize #1 and especially #2 -- those highlights of all your most and even more importantly all your least favorite scenes are really important for me to help cut stuff because I'm so attached to my own ideas. :)
Finally, it would be helpful to me if you could give a score from 1 to 10. Just go with your gut and I can handle any number (as long as it's above a 2). :)
Any contributions will be considered a work for hire.
Looking for a 5 day turnaround with feedback provided on each script as it's ready.
If you're interested but not available at the moment just let me know and perhaps we can collaborate on future drafts/scripts.
Thank you.
I'm looking for screenplay feedback. There are 8 short scripts totaling around 35 pages (some are micro scripts that are just a page or two).
I'll mention right off the bat that most of the scripts involve gay characters and a few might be considered extremely irreverent towards religion/god so may not be for everyone. (And several are also quite surreal/absurdist.)
I want to cut anything that's not great so I need someone primarily to (1) highlight in one color all scenes/moments that most resonate with them (2) cross out/highlight in another color all those they dislike; and (3) make suggestions for improving specific scenes/moments and the overall scripts. I ask that the highlights be on the screenplay itself though you are welcome to make your comments on a separate document if that's easier for you.
I need to emphasize #1 and especially #2 -- those highlights of all your most and even more importantly all your least favorite scenes are really important for me to help cut stuff because I'm so attached to my own ideas. :)
Finally, it would be helpful to me if you could give a score from 1 to 10. Just go with your gut and I can handle any number (as long as it's above a 2). :)
Any contributions will be considered a work for hire.
Looking for a 5 day turnaround with feedback provided on each script as it's ready.
If you're interested but not available at the moment just let me know and perhaps we can collaborate on future drafts/scripts.
Thank you.