Proofreading and rewriting an artist biography

I've written an artist biography draft.

I need an expert in business writing to polish/rewrite it in a way to show the mix of the engineering side and art side of the artist in the biography. The artist's whole academic and industrial career is in Computer Science.

My main objective is to represent the artist as a multi-talented person and professional in art and computer science worlds. In other words, I want to intelligently use the credit of their industrial/academic expertise in the art biography since the audience appreciate it.

The biography is only one paragraph.