Polish My Teen Adventure Story

I’ve just finished drafting an Indonesian short-story script in the adventure genre, written for a teenage audience. Before I take it any further, I need a fresh set of expert eyes to tighten the pacing, sharpen the dialogue, and make sure every page truly resonates with young readers.

Here’s what I’m hoping you can do for me:
• Perform a full editorial sweep—grammar, spelling, and stylistic consistency.
• Flag any plot gaps or character moments that could use extra punch.
• Deliver two versions: one showing tracked changes and comments, and one clean copy ready for submission.

If you’ve worked on YA or coming-of-age fiction, that insight will be invaluable. Send over samples that demonstrate your touch with teen-focused narratives, and let’s make this story shine.