Polish My Story’s Prose

I have a finished story that says everything I want it to say, but the sentences sometimes tie themselves in knots. Your job is to untangle them. Focus on simplifying the complex constructions and refining the overall flow so it reads easily for a broad, general-audience crowd. I don’t need new plot points, extra scenes, or dramatic stylistic detours—just a cleaner, more natural narrative that still feels like my voice.

Deliverables
• A fully rewritten manuscript in its final form (Word or Google Doc)
• A second copy with Track Changes or inline suggestions so I can see exactly what you adjusted

If you’re comfortable honing prose for clarity and rhythm, while keeping the heart of the story intact, I’d love to hand the pages over to you.