Personal statement proofreading

Hi, I would like you to proofread my personal statement of interest and background. It shouldn't take much time as it is less than 2 pages only. You should check the following:

- Typos, spelling or grammatical errors
- Make sure that it has strong, clear, and concise writing
- Cliches and repetitive language
- Formal language (i.e., academic writing)
- Positive and confident tone
- Plagiarism (Turnitin)

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Thank you