English essay editing and proofreading (3 essays 500 words) -- 2

Hello i am looking for someone to help with college essay proofreading before i submit. i NEED someone to be help with following tasks
1. correcting spelling, grammar, punctuation, and typos
2. Ensuring proper use of tenses, capitalization, and subject-verb agreement
3. Improving syntax, flow, clarity, readability, conciseness, consistency, and word choice
4. Minimizing repetition, wordiness, and redundancy
5. Improve essay flow and overall coherence

I will add a short paragraph sample to be edited.

Please include the 1. (edited paragraph) in your job application letter along with (your rate) for editing 3 essays of about 500 words.

Note: The main project is different than this sample but it is close to it.

" During my childhood, I spent most of my time drawing pictures of my favorite cartoons and places. Drawing was my favorite hobby and a channel to express myself to the world. This helped develop my dexterity skills naturally and paying attention to the most discreet of details in images. Even though I stopped before the start of high school. I still wanted to incorporate this aspect of using my hand and in my future job."