Feedback Needed for my animated fantasy children's movie -- 5
Budget: $10 – $30 USD
I have a movie that I and a co-writer made. Me and him have since had a falling out and I will be making a new version of the film soon. After I reasoned with him, he said he would allow me to use his writing for a manageable sum. But first I want feedback on this version.
The movie is called "The Wogglebug, and Sylvie, and the Enchanted Forest" and it is uploaded to YouTube in a private listing. It is an animated children's fantasy adventure film. Therefore, I am especially looking for people who have children or at least know of any who this movie can be shown. Things I want to know are: What is your overall impression of it? And what are your favorite scenes and your least favorite scenes? So that I have a good idea of what I should include in my new version. I just want strictly honest feedback from my targeted audience.
My targeted audience is children ages 4 to 12. And I am especially interested in how appealing the main character of the Wogglebug is or isn't in the film. I also want to know how to shorten the movie's length while keeping everything the same. My goal for the movie is to become a household favorite among families and something for teachers to include in lesson plans.
I seek feedback from people who will do so at a low price as I can't afford much now. I am also interested in people who are story experts and can point out to me what may need improvement with my movie before the new version.
Please submit if interested.
The movie is called "The Wogglebug, and Sylvie, and the Enchanted Forest" and it is uploaded to YouTube in a private listing. It is an animated children's fantasy adventure film. Therefore, I am especially looking for people who have children or at least know of any who this movie can be shown. Things I want to know are: What is your overall impression of it? And what are your favorite scenes and your least favorite scenes? So that I have a good idea of what I should include in my new version. I just want strictly honest feedback from my targeted audience.
My targeted audience is children ages 4 to 12. And I am especially interested in how appealing the main character of the Wogglebug is or isn't in the film. I also want to know how to shorten the movie's length while keeping everything the same. My goal for the movie is to become a household favorite among families and something for teachers to include in lesson plans.
I seek feedback from people who will do so at a low price as I can't afford much now. I am also interested in people who are story experts and can point out to me what may need improvement with my movie before the new version.
Please submit if interested.