Feedback Needed for my animated children's movie

Job ID: 38417705

Budget: $10 – $30 USD

I have a movie that I and a co-writer made. Me and him have since had a falling out and I will be making a new version of the film soon. After I reasoned with him, he said he would allow me to use his writing for a manageable sum. But first I want feedback on this version.

The movie is uploaded to YouTube in a private listing. It is an animated children's fantasy adventure film. So, I am especially looking for people who have children or at least know of any who this movie can be shown to. Things I want to know are: What is your overall impression of it? And what are your favorite scenes and your least favorite scenes? So that I have a good idea of what I should include in my new version. I just want strictly honest feedback from my targeted audience.

I am interested also in people who are story experts and can point out to me what may need improvement with my movie before the new version.