Comprehensive CV Review for Software Director

I'm looking for a Director of Software Development position, using my current CV, for more than 3 months. However, the lack of response prompts me to seek professional critique. Requesting comprehensive feedback, including but not limited to:

- Analysis of format and layout: Am I correctly employing strategic arrangement to highlight my most compelling qualifications?
- Evaluation of content structure: Is the progression of my career summary and experience clear and compelling?
- Review of language and grammar: Are there any grammatical errors that might be causing me to miss out on opportunities?
- ATS results check
- The reviewers' points should be objective and straight to the cause, driven by professional experience, matters of thinking or believing are not welcome.

A freelancer must have proven experience in HR and recruitment, particularly in the software development field. An eye for detail and a strong understanding of professional CV standards in the industry are must-have skills.