Strengthen design/layout of trifold brochure

Looking to improve the design of a trifold brochure. We like the text and pictures, but the layout and font selection are weak. We used Canva as an informal template for what we are looking for. The link is here:

https://www.canva.com/design/DAFJxuF3BCI/N9gGl0UYv4mYeUGHQEtOzg/view?utm_content=DAFJxuF3BCI&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link&utm_source=publishsharelink&mode=preview

Also attaching the version we got back from our printer. We don't want a total redo, but we would like something sharper and more attractive.