Graphic Design & Illustration in Photoshop

I have created an image on power point and I want someone to use photoshop to make it more appealing and modern. the image is attached.
the image is to be used on the website metalogicx.com on the home page.

here are similar examples websites and the images used on them. I do not want exact replica of those images. But I want someone creative to create a modern design.
www.metaloop.com