Mabel's Free Clinic "Story"

I am trying to write a "core message" to our funders to help them connect with our "stories". I have a two page paper that is boring and does not compel me to want to connect. I need a story writer to tell our story to these funders in our letters and develop core messages I can place in the letter to request funds. Our core message has to compel people. Right now, it does not.