The rise of Timbuktu

For my fiction novel, it’s a story about a kid named Timbuktu from a village called Kuntake. He grows having a dream of becoming the best warrior, following his grand father named Timbulu who was also a great fighter/soldier. When Timbuktu’s father is murdered, he then embarks on the journey of becoming a fighter leaving everything else behind. I have attached a small rough draft below. Thanks