Ghostwriter needed for script overhaul

We are looking for someone who can help us create a unique and compelling story. We would like to change it from a typical love story to a story of self discovery of inner worth. We are going for like a "Beauty and the Beast" meets "Hunchback of Norte Dame" with a "Fight Club" twist. Included are a few scripts that I have had done for this story on the past to give you an idea of what we are coming from. I like the "teaser" scene but you feel that we have no need for it, I open to ideas. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to ask. Thanks.