Improve an outline

I have an outline that needs some work on the second half, following my suggestions you have to improve the second half. If your work is approved you will be selected to write the detailed outline and chapters, you should be creative, romantic and a lover of visual novel games like Choices, Moments etc. If your outline/improvement is accepted you will be paid for it, if we don't like it, you are not obliged to get any payment. Send a bid if you are confident that you will be able to improve the outline with your creativity.

Start your proposal with the name of your favorite Visual novel game (from choices, Episodes, Moments, etc), so that I understand that you have read the job description and agree to the terms.