Sci-Fi Novel Developmental Editing and Rewriting

Job ID: 38691713

Budget: $10 – $30 AUD

I'm seeking an editor to developmentally edit and rewrite weaker parts of my sci-fi novel.

Key Requirements:
- Strong portfolio of past editing, particularly in the sci-fi genre.
- Exceptional world-building, character development and writing skills.
- Understanding of the specifications required so the author voice/ tone doesn't change (some paragraphs were written with the help of AI).

Information about the book:
- 32,005 words
- Sci-fi/steampunk/dystopian.
- Will be published through KDP.
- The story is very flat, and lacks depth regarding world-building, character relationships and character development -- and just in general.

Please include examples of your past work, specifically regarding sci-fi. Although there is no strict deadline, I am looking for a professional who can dedicate time and effort to create a quality product.

Synopsis: In the towering, polluted city of Spheros, where flight is forbidden and the air is thick with smog, Tori dreams of soaring above the walls that trap them all. She spends years building delicate wings of glass and vitrim, powered by the city's core, determined to escape and see the world beyond. But when her wings crack and she crashes to the ground, her dream shatters.
Tori soon finds herself caught between the Council’s secretive rule and the city’s looming destruction. Her estranged brother, Theo, an assistant to Councillor Gar, knows more than he’s letting on. Together with their former friend Kyran—once a loyal enforcer, now a rebel—they uncover a terrifying truth: Spheros’s power core is failing, and with it, the entire city is on the brink of collapse.
As the Council scrambles to maintain control, they keep the city’s ruthless security head, Tian, hunting Tori and her allies down. While the city crumbles, Tori, Theo, and Kyran must race against time to escape.