Sci-Fi Book Story Development and Editing

Job ID: 39159387

Budget: $8 – $15 USD

I have written a small book. 62 pages and 29652 words.

I want you to:
1. Read through the book, highlight issues such as plot holes or situations where the readers suspension of disbelief gets torn to shreds including ideas on how to fix it.
2. I read through your comments and give me feedback
3. You write the final version for me.

There is nothing in the task about fixing grammar or spelling errors, this is all about figuring out how to make the actual story better.