Revamp my Resume and Cover Letter

I'm looking for someone to review, proofread, and edit my resume; I keep it current but will be applying for a Sr. Executive role and need some help with content. You must have experience in writing and reviewing resumes, and preferably interviewing executives. I've already included some comments within the document for your consideration. I also expect you to review and fix any grammar errors. Don't worry about the length nor alignment; focus on the content. Feel free to ask me about the industry/role via chat before you bid.