Plot Enhancement for Novel Manuscript

I’m midway through writing a novel that I believe could translate beautifully to the screen as a feature film or limited series. The overarching story is sound, yet several pivotal moments still feel under-developed. I need a seasoned story editor to help me enhance the existing plot points so the narrative hits harder, flows better, and keeps viewers—one day—on the edge of their seats.

Scope of work
• Perform a close read of my current 60-k-word draft (Word or Google Docs) and flag any weak, confusing, or predictable sections.
• Deliver a revised, chapter-by-chapter outline that sharpens pacing, heightens stakes, and clarifies cause-and-effect.
• Suggest concrete scene adjustments, added beats, or tightened turns that strengthen the emotional payoff while respecting my voice.
• Provide a brief wrap-up report (2–3 pages) explaining the structural changes you propose and why they work.

Timeline
I’d like the first round of feedback within three weeks of project start, followed by one revision pass to confirm the final direction.

What to include in your reply
Please highlight your experience with fiction editing, story consulting, or screenplay development—especially projects that successfully moved from page to screen.

If you love collaborative story building and can elevate an existing plot without rewriting me entirely, I’d love to work with you.