Fine-Tune Difficult/Humorous Semi-Autobiographical Script

Job ID: 37807607

Budget: €250 – €750 EUR

In an effort to bring my personal story to life, I've written a short film script, it's a monologue that navigates life's difficulties with a touch of humour. However, it needs a few finishing touches:

• Grammar and spelling: It's vital that the script is 100% error-free so the focus remains solely on the story.
• Structure Improvement: The storyline does not necessarily flow logically. I need an eye for improving the script's overall formatting. The structure is pretty much as I want it, but i'm interested in comments/thought that might help improve the overall project
• Read-aloud: I also require the script to be read aloud and improved where necessary, maintaining the script's balance between levity and the seriousness of the subject matter.

The script is less than 30 pages so it won't take too much of your time. Ideally, you should have a knack for storytelling and familiarity with semi-autobiographical narration. Also, a sense of humour would be greatly appreciated. Rest assured, your name will be credited for your contribution to this project. Let's bring this story to life together.
I am an artist, predominately working with visual imagery, but I have also made a few short videos with voice overs. My intention is to present the finished piece in a gallery with a very slow film. Possibly just one long shot, so that the scrip will carry the piece.
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