Fiction Book Readability Review

I'm seeking a freelancer to review my fiction book aimed at adults. The primary concern is the overall readability of the manuscript. This includes assessing the flow, pacing, and consistency in order to ensure that the book resonates with the intended audience.

Ideal Skills and Experience:
- Experienced editor or proofreader with a focus on fiction
- Understands the needs and expectations of adult readers
- Ability to provide constructive feedback on overall readability

Please submit your bid with relevant examples of your work.