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Former NYPD detective and 9/11 first responder Marco DeLuca lives in the shadow of trauma, haunted by the death of his partner during the North Tower rescue. Struggling with PTSD, estranged from his family, and facing suspension from the force, Marco’s life is adrift—until a strange, pulsing hum begins emanating from his Long Island yard. Soon, disabled veterans and first responders report miraculous healings after visiting the site.
The phenomenon draws national attention—and dangerous interest. Powerful real estate mogul John Stones, a charismatic billionaire with deep political connections and a history of corruption, sees the healing ground as a goldmine. Backed by Russian Oligarchs and political operatives, Stones will stop at nothing to control it.
As the battle escalates, Marco finds himself in the crosshairs of ruthless players—corrupt politicians, foreign mobsters, and the media—while the veterans and neighbors he’s sworn to protect rally around him. Forced to confront his deepest guilt and fears, Marco must decide how much he’s willing to sacrifice to keep the healing power out of the wrong hands.
Need honest feedback regarding pace, character development, Show vs Tel, readability etc.
Former NYPD detective and 9/11 first responder Marco DeLuca lives in the shadow of trauma, haunted by the death of his partner during the North Tower rescue. Struggling with PTSD, estranged from his family, and facing suspension from the force, Marco’s life is adrift—until a strange, pulsing hum begins emanating from his Long Island yard. Soon, disabled veterans and first responders report miraculous healings after visiting the site.
The phenomenon draws national attention—and dangerous interest. Powerful real estate mogul John Stones, a charismatic billionaire with deep political connections and a history of corruption, sees the healing ground as a goldmine. Backed by Russian Oligarchs and political operatives, Stones will stop at nothing to control it.
As the battle escalates, Marco finds himself in the crosshairs of ruthless players—corrupt politicians, foreign mobsters, and the media—while the veterans and neighbors he’s sworn to protect rally around him. Forced to confront his deepest guilt and fears, Marco must decide how much he’s willing to sacrifice to keep the healing power out of the wrong hands.
Need honest feedback regarding pace, character development, Show vs Tel, readability etc.