Anime/developmental/story edit

Job ID: 36218531

Budget: $30 – $250 USD

In need of a proofreader/ghost writer/editor. Whatever lml. I've written a full animation series in hopes of getting it animated obviously. But the problem im having is being consistent in dialog/action/plot. The way I wrote it Is so confusing

Needing to be more gruesome/violent/dark
Giving off the vibe of "Berserk" , "Fairy tale", "Hunter x Hunter"
with a little bit of cthulu lore

Set in a dark fantasy world, the story centers on the characters of Ray a lone swordsman and his crew he finds along the way. Being shunned by royalty. He sets out on a path of being the strongest hunter